Xaotik's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[I'll Be There For You]

I lol'd when she asked about the rain falling, sneaky reference to the opening theme from Friends.

LazyMuffin responds:

It seems like a sneaky reference? That was my main jokes. WHOOPS!

[Stainville Episode 1]

This...

... reminded me a lot of Super Jail (YouTube it if you don't know what it is) as far as the plot-line went.

The artwork could be improved on but you'll get better with that as you practice more.

Nice work.

Alpha-Nuva responds:

yes, i've seen superjail. and you're the second person to mention it in a review, which absolutely tickles me to know. a year ago when i first saw it, some people challenged me to make a superjail-esque series (long before i had the idea of this cartoon) and then this comes into fruition.

[The Greatest Aether]

Ehh... Decent First Flash...

Its not bad... Honestly... I have no clue what it is, but its still nice for sprite art.

One suggestion I can make, is that if you're going to submit something this short, sounds and some kind of story could help.

Also, theres really no need for those buttons to be all psychedelic and pulsing, its kind of an eyesore... you seem to be decent at assembling pixel-based art, so maybe working on some pixel-themed buttons...

Ryufirestorm responds:

Alright, a story sounds like it could be on it's way. Nice idea. And the reason I chose those "flashy" buttons is because most of my animations I've made (not uploaded) have just boring old roll-over flashes. Sounds are on their way, I've just got to figure out which ones I'm going to use and how to use them.

[Pokemon: Pee Red Version]

Immediate, permanent frontpage...

Well, NG Staff, u heard me, permanent front-page this 6.9MB of pure Awesome, otherwise I'm goin on a hunger-strike*

And to the author: Uber flash, faved it. The movie had me crapping myself with laughter from scene one, and you didn't go overkill on the sex jokes like most video-game parodies do... U had the perfect balance. Now make more, or I'll hunger-strike*

*Oldsage10 may or may not ACTUALLY hunger-strike, but there is a 99.999999% chance that he will not...

OrangePylon responds:

Sex jokes will often be more awkward than funny, so I tend to avoid those. Pedophilia jokes are insta-lulz though.

I don't know if this'd get frontpaged. If it did, I'd be really super happy, but since I respond to every review I can see it getting very annoying.

[Internet Identity]

10 ALL THE WAY!

The artwork was a really nice and somewhat unique style, the sounds synced perfectly, the theme couldn't have been more accurate. Some parts of this movie were funny, others were serious; I really loved the interactive part because it allowed the viewer to talk their way out of Tommy's retarded mistake. The only thing I would suggest is to make different conversation options lead to different places, I don't like that there was only one answer, but still, an enjoyable piece nonetheless.

battay responds:

Thanks for the awesome review. :)

[random madness loop]

Eh...

Yeah, I could probably do this in 4 minutes (LOL, thanks for mentioning me in the title screen) But I know that this is like your second time OPENING Flash, as a Programmer and your friend, I can appreciate that you actually learned how to loop it properly and put in a preloader...

darthmarus responds:

yeah... to be honest it wasn't that hard. the entire .fla file only has 2 frames.

[The 30min Animation]

Very decent.

This appears to be your first submission, I must say, the shading done on the pickle was masterful for a beginner, and also, the lip syncing of the words was un-speakably amazing (no pun intended)

You appear to be on your way to some great flash submissions in the future.

A couple of things I would suggest though, you may want to work on some higher detail blood, and work on your human form some more, the people were clearly people, but a little detail couldn't hurt.

fart-boy responds:

yeah I'll submit better ones, this is just the beggining

[PeanutButter goes to Jail]

Not bad...

... I usually hate Clock Crew stuff, but this is definently an exception to my usual voting habits.

I also found the easter egg... It is a little hardcore for a rated teen submission man...

peanutbutterclawk responds:

GOOD.

[Tomm-E]

Very Very Good...

It was funny, had the feel of the Real Movie, and it had good graphics.

~ This right here is just jokin around ~

H4X0R, U cant submit 3 works in 1 day!

MarcyVF responds:

Thank you, what did you mean with the two last sentences? :O

[Wild Side Ravens: Trailer]

Looks good...

You worked so hard on the trailer that the full this is guaranteed to be great...

Android-Music responds:

I feel a little shy: just 6 days(1 hour per day). My grats to you anyway!